Today, Wairere writers learned to respect their readers by not telling the reader all the details. It is important to sometimes show, not tell all the details. I wonder if you can use the clues to figure out what emotion is being described.
"I gulped. I shook in the darkness and my teeth began to chatter. All of a sudden..... BANG!" by Alexus
"A shiver ran down my spine. My body started stiffening. I was taking my dog for a walk in the park. Someone was watching me, I knew it!" by Hannah
Showing posts with label Hannah. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Hannah. Show all posts
Thursday, 25 June 2015
Friday, 12 June 2015
40 Hour Famine
WOW Hannah!! You have raised $60 to put towards Isleworth's contribution to the 40 Hour Famine. This year, World Vision is raising funds for Bangladesh. Over 8 million children are malnourished there. The money will go towards establishing emergency feeding programmes, teaching families how to grow vegetables and improving access to health and nutrition services. Way to go, Hannah and our other brave 40hr Faminers! You're making a difference in the world! If you still have outstanding money to collect from your sponsors, please do so this weekend and hand it to Ms K on Monday.
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